The One
can't take
the faithless
beyond this,
until they see.
The faithless
can't take
the One,
until they see
beyond this.
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This poem
could use
a world
to live in.
A world
could use
this poem
to live in.
I don't think rearranging the lines is as effective in a poetic sense when they create the same grammatical structure. If you remove the line breaks, this is more of a pithy saying about a disconnect between man and God prior to the intervention of grace.
but you are getting your rhetoric down.
and after the intervention of grace, don't you think?
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